Life's Zugzwang

As she woke up to answer the phone on her bed
Just wanted to hear your voice, he said
Holding her breath as she spoke
Hello to the person over the phone
Thinking about the dream she had
Two people under that lovely shed
Loosing her thoughts she heard him say
Reminding her of the place they once stayed
And then he asked her how you are today
Never before she felt her heart sway
To the tune of words she was hearing
Stuck in her thoughts with the man who was speaking
And lost was she in her own world dreaming
Alongside this only person she kept wishing
Her dream world to turn into reality
And walk with pride in that beautiful city
City which is called as love
Having a straight road without any curve
Still talking with him she realized
She was on the phone, she sighed
Wishing for the right time she cried
And kept down the phone on her side!

Comments

U can call me your attorney said…
arey waah!! badiya hai badiya...
honey at her best again!!
Tuesday, March 31, 2009 3:41:00 PM
Kaycee said…
This comment should ve come 2 days back!
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Waaah... waah! kya likha hain... beautifully crafted, and the way the lines show the emotions... simply brilliant!

I just love the title of the poem !!! [:D]

Tu sach main poetess bann jaa professionally... !

Cheers,
KC
Tuesday, March 31, 2009 10:18:00 PM
S@RG@M said…
Indeed a nice one. The yearning's been carved out really well. The desperation is dropping outta every line you wrote there.
Saturday, April 11, 2009 1:23:00 PM
Lan said…
thats cool!! nice blog; keep it going!! :)
Wednesday, April 15, 2009 12:38:00 PM
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