Untitled!!

need a reverse button
want to go back and feel the emotion
left those time at this world's formation
wanting it so much from heart's bottom

love and life are at fusion
eyes are meeting with this illusion
this is not the new creation
guess, its just the dissolution

air passing through this boulevard
welcoming the change, says the card
making the moves pretty hard
its just how this life starts

breathing through this evolution
need some more respiration
left without any other option
there must be some other solution

thinking and calculating the time
gladly this frame is not mine
going to make this all fine
never will ever commit another crime

blissfully crawling
twisting and moving
peeping and learning
Just go on living!

Comments

vagabond dreamer said…
nice, sometimes life seems impossibly fast. dosent it
Sunday, April 20, 2008 7:31:00 PM
Unknown said…
You seem to be at your philosophical best with this bit of poem!
Anyone who has read this, can easily relate to it!
Sahi hain bhidu....
Keep blogging..!!!

Cheers,
KC
Sunday, April 20, 2008 8:02:00 PM
Unknown said…
gr8...name it as....UNEXPRESSED EMOTIONS....lolz..

but it really reflects what todays life is all about...

nice poem...keep it up!!!
Sunday, April 20, 2008 11:27:00 PM
Mihir Pandya said…
Hey mujhe 'lage raho munnabhai' ki wo shruaati khoobsurat poem yaad aa gayi.

"jindagi ki daud me daudkar karna kya hai.
agar yahi jeena hai to phir marna kya hai."

lekin ismein kahin ek positive approch bhi chhupa hai aisa mujhe laga. kya main theek samjha hoon..?
Friday, May 09, 2008 1:20:00 AM
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