Ordeal or Bliss?

well may be when two people get into a close relationship called love.. the moment they clear to each other their hearts, the feeling of losing and winning is mixed, the following just describes that one moment, when all is finally done.. :)

Won yet lost
The feeling is a toast
It lasted for then
Broke later that pen
Tolerable is the moment
Sentiments under that tent
Whispered
Heard the words,contended
Departed
Captivated, scrolling ahead
Instantly, life changed
Still beating but differently
Attached
Its devotion
And fashionably attraction!

Comments

Kaycee said…
Ah ha! It's really worth an applause!
Might look just a moment, but for that specific moment, you described so beautifully!

Nice work!

Keep bloggin!
Keep Rockin' !

Cheers,
KC
Sunday, January 18, 2009 4:37:00 PM
Gaurav Jain said…
these words can be written and understood by someone who has gone through this process..;)
vaise,the way you attach your words,is too fascinating for me..
tolerable is the moment,sentiments under that tent..bravo..
and the last few lines,still beating but differently attached..gosh,amazing..:)
Monday, January 19, 2009 10:43:00 AM
S@RG@M said…
Still beating but differently... Yep! Thats true, as much as is your next masterpiece... And am still reading, but differently!
Tuesday, January 20, 2009 12:14:00 PM
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