There, and Now

Awake, finally I can see
This whole new world around me
Created and formed
Grown from the seed into tree
Picked and chosen
Separated from the dust and free
Left and forgotten
Time which was morose and acerbic
Preserved and embalmed
Bitter but the sweet memories
Magical and illusory
Detached with the foregone history
Protected and assembled
My only possession, if I can mention
This life, owed to ones I remember
Trembling but determined
I take a step and enter
Into the new world where I surrender

Comments

S@RG@M said…
Quite an encouraging piece of work. Enthusiastic in its own sense, the best thing is how you specifically separate the past from present... removing the time, removing the unwanted... "there" and "now". And well, the inevitable.... usage of "illusory". ha ha ha. The way you've remembered only what you wanted to, and kept only what you thought of, makes it really attractive. Nice work over all.

Keep writing Shavii...
Saturday, September 06, 2008 4:36:00 PM
Kaycee said…
Hey!
I'm speechless after reading "There and Now"!!!
Do i need to say anything more?

Hope you write everyday!!!

Kudos!

Cheers,
KC
Saturday, September 06, 2008 8:34:00 PM
"da unconcious domain" said…
Another of her good poems....
and once more used her fav word "iLLuSoRy"!! :D

Salient features of her poem....

- beautifully "created and formed"

- "picked and choosen" good words (hd to look fr meanings of sum in dictionary :D )

- can't b easily "left or forgotten"

- "Magical and illusory" as-usual

- "Protected and assembled"
"Preserved and embalmed" on this blog.

:P
Wednesday, September 10, 2008 6:19:00 PM
Unknown said…
well..to be honest..i really like this piece of work..! written from bottom of heart...gr88 work..! though i dont understand a word of 2 from it...am bad at vocab..but feeling is pretty much clear..! nice one...way to go!! keep it up dear...
Saturday, September 13, 2008 6:29:00 PM
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