Incessant Flame

Heated talks and the dark night
Always yearning to hold her tight
Whispering his love in her ears
Feeling the warmth of her breath so clear
He was lying beside her without any fear
Waiting for the moment to draw her near
Speaking softly in her sleep to let her hear
The Love he has for her sleeping dear

With rays peeping through the hole of the curtain
Trying to disturb the night which was calm and subtle
He wanted to take her away from those lights
To let her love sleep peacefully on that night
Thunders and storms all happening outside
Not letting him step away from her side
Worried he, was praying for a miracle
To switch off that button, regaining the silence

Feeling so powerless and upset
He was trying to enter into a bet
With the nature so angry tonight
Pleading it not to pick up any fight
His love is sleeping after a long time
Please let her rest, for once tonight
With this, he lost his sight
Cursing the weather, he cried

Though trying his best, he thought he failed
Yet she woke up with a smile on her face
Putting her hand into his hands
She thanked God for making him her friend
Whose care she felt while she slept
Outside her protective layer, where he wept
What more could have she asked for
Except the love her soul mate bestowed!

Comments

U can call me your attorney said…
why cant she sleep???
it ws so intriguing post..so vivid...

too good shaveta! too good :)
Friday, June 19, 2009 10:42:00 PM
Shaveta said…
chitwan sa'ab..pyar mei bhala neend kiss kambhaqat ko aati hai :D

nyways thanks a lot for the appreciation! glad u liked it!
Friday, June 19, 2009 11:31:00 PM
Kaycee said…
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Saturday, June 20, 2009 5:40:00 PM
Kaycee said…
Hey Shavs.... ur every poem is just gettin better n better!!

Another masterpiece from u! Really kewl che...!

Keep writin more!

Cheers,
KC
Saturday, June 20, 2009 6:26:00 PM
Kaycee said…
waise ek aur cheez hain... lots of ur poems are abt "Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat!" :P
Saturday, June 20, 2009 6:47:00 PM
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